Strengths and Weaknesses feedback evaluation

Based off of the feedback we had managed to gather we feel as if there were some things here and there that we could use to improve, in terms of what made our film good in places as well as what bits didn't look the most appealing or fitting etc.

For strengths, our film had a great and thought out narrative that the audience were able to follow easily. The emotions that was conveyed was very clear throughout the film and the audience were able to understand what was going on and also to connect with the character effectively especially when it came to his emotions. The film was structured very well overall and it was clear when the scenes were transitioning from one to another. Music was a really good choice and used in appropriate times to properly invoke an effect on the audience. There were also some decent visual effects used, though mainly at the beginning of the film and the slow change throughout. 

However as for our weaknesses, the ending of our film left some of the viewers a bit confused as to what was happening, we feel as if we could probably have built more onto this if more time was allowed so we could actually build the story up a bit more, rather than having these massive cuts. The noise of the camera also was heard once or twice during some scenes and was noticeable clearly by the audiences. This came to be a rather serious issue, as its something quite annoying to hear.

In order to address the aforementioned weaknesses, we had decided to re-film some additional shots at the end, such as the character changing moods to display his emotions changing in a more gradual way rather than immediately from one to another. Also, a voiceover towards the end of the film explaining what the character is thinking as he kicks the chair down, to shed some light upon why he's so angry all of a sudden.