Feedback no.1
- Background noise to be edited
- a few jump cuts that could be smoother
- Good storyline used
Feedback no.2
- Kick the chair harder
- Spend more time closing the fist
Feedback no.3
- Background noise makes it difficult for the dialogue to be heard
- Use a voiceover to cover any quiet dialogue
Feedback no.4
- Too much wind take over
- Good use of zoom in
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