This is the offline edit, for the short film both me and my peer have made together, with this edit we have essentially put all of our footage that we needed in chronological order from our storyboard and script from start to finish, this was mostly to make sure we have all footage required before we add any over the top effects and music, this is essentially the base line of our Short film right after we filmed the shots. We figured out from this for the most part that there are some bits here and there that need tweaking and effects to make really impactful and stand out, to gain the effect we desire on the audience. For instance, some solemn music to show the setting and mood of the overall film itself, and of course, over the really windy scene, some form of voice over so the audience can actually understand what the character is saying.
Feedback no.1
- Background noise to be edited
- a few jump cuts that could be smoother
- Good storyline used
Feedback no.2
- Kick the chair harder
- Spend more time closing the fist
Feedback no.3
- Background noise makes it difficult for the dialogue to be heard
- Use a voiceover to cover any quiet dialogue
Feedback no.4
- Too much wind take over
- Good use of zoom in
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